http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c2_WIMFXzqw&feature=youtu.be
Thoughts/suggestions for improvement?
The video shows the game in its current 2d state diadem fucked around with this message on 02-27-2013 at 10:47 AM.
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/515/alteil2battleidea3.jpg/
All in all this Video feels very utilitarian; boring even. There's no emotion in it, as the voice actor is just flatly throwing some sentences at you. Then there's nothing to make me interested in the game. It fails at conveying the game itself. What does it bring to the table? What makes it unique? The few sentences that are in the Video make it sound exactly like MTG. In my opinion the music also fails to match the atmosphere you want to convey with the art of the game. Shouldn't it be more, I don't know -epic-; getting you pumped to play it? (Although, admittedly I am not really sure what music would fit the generic "animu" art that is used for this game.)
Compare it to this for example: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vIBMQTxmcG0
Designers talking somewhat passionate about the game, why you want to play it, some hints of how to play it, and what differentiates it from other card games.
Also, why do a Trailer now, when the game will look MUCH better in a while?
That 3d render looks pretty good though.
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I'll be honest. I think it is pretty bad.All in all this Video feels very utilitarian; boring even. There's no emotion in it, as the voice actor is just flatly throwing some sentences at you. Then there's nothing to make me interested in the game. It fails at conveying the game itself. What does it bring to the table? What makes it unique? The few sentences that are in the Video make it sound exactly like MTG. In my opinion the music also fails to match the atmosphere you want to convey with the art of the game. Shouldn't it be more, I don't know -epic-; getting you pumped to play it? (Although, admittedly I am not really sure what music would fit the generic "animu" art that is used for this game.)
Compare it to this for example: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vIBMQTxmcG0
Designers talking somewhat passionate about the game, why you want to play it, some hints of how to play it, and what differentiates it from other card games.
Also, why do a Trailer now, when the game will look MUCH better in a while?
