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Topic: Feedback needed - choose a logo prototype
diadem
eet bugz
posted 03-26-2012 06:02:11 PM

If you think they all suck or some need tweaking, speak up! This is the point where I chose what logo to use and they start working on making it look good.

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Bloodsage
Heart Attack
posted 03-26-2012 06:14:49 PM
None of them really remind me of the apocolypse...? I was expecting something a little more doom-like.
To reign is worth ambition, though in Hell:
Better to reign in Hell than serve in Heaven.

--Satan, quoted by John Milton

nem-x
posted 03-26-2012 06:35:14 PM
SA-Mart has some people who do great logo designs if you're looking for something different.
Bloodsage
Heart Attack
posted 03-26-2012 07:22:05 PM
I guess the question is what you'd like your logo to convey to the audience.
To reign is worth ambition, though in Hell:
Better to reign in Hell than serve in Heaven.

--Satan, quoted by John Milton

Tarquinn
Personally responsible for the decline of the American Dollar
posted 03-27-2012 02:27:39 AM
Don't really like one of those. Sorry.
~Never underestimate the power of a Dark Clown.
Blindy.
Suicide (Also: Gay.)
posted 03-27-2012 06:04:10 AM
Three is the only one that really suggests a physical board game in any form, and at that it suggests a boring one like monopoly or sorry with the generic square track around the rim of the board, and I'm not sure what the finger in the center is supposed to be.

I think that of the 5 you've got here, three is in the right direction, but it needs to go further, and be evocative of the types of games you want to have on your service. A Hex shape? Several Hexes? ApocoPlay in a Hex Pattern?

I'm not a graphic designer of any sort, but maybe like this but with a hint of talent?

I dunno, just a thought.

diadem
eet bugz
posted 03-27-2012 06:17:52 AM
I'm not sure why I had to direct link to see your image, but I like where you are going.

The most popular logo from polls outside of evercrest seems to be 5, followed by 3. I've got a decent amount of I don't like any of these as well. it is critical that you follow Tarquinn's lead if you don't like any of these. I'm paying these people good money to design a logo that is pleasing to my target audience, which are you guys.

One suggestion somebody came up with was to turn one of the letters into a game piece. I'm thinking I can have each game have its own variation of the logo with the current game piece (think the google logo), though I'd have to ask a branding expert if that's a horrible idea.

As for 3 resembling trivial pursuit/monopoly, I tend to agree. I think the "poke" part is cute though, as it implies that you are choosing the game you want to be built.

diadem fucked around with this message on 03-27-2012 at 06:20 AM.

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Blindy.
Suicide (Also: Gay.)
posted 03-27-2012 07:57:09 AM
I like the typeface of #5 best, but I don't know what the spheres are supposed to be, or why there is a star in the black one.

Maybe take that and try to add some art to evoke "board game".

Blindy. fucked around with this message on 03-27-2012 at 07:57 AM.

Bajah
Thooooooor
posted 03-27-2012 09:41:40 AM
I'm assuming the low-res is intentional.

But I'm with Tarquinn, none of these stand out or 'grab my interest' at all.

A logo needs to represent your company, not necessarily your specific product(s) or brand of products. I'd suggest deciding on something that reflects your mission statement or end goals. A suggestion from me would be building your logo around this statement:

quote:
Out of a possible 10, Ghost of Forums Past scored a straight 1 with:
[QB]If there's one thing that most of you probably know about me it's that I like building things that make people happy.

That is the core of the man we know as diadem and that is what your logo should tell people - that this is a company which builds things that make people happy. As such, since you're paying them - can I suggest taking your logo and incorporating a children's playground kind of theme to it? After all, that's the epitome of building something that makes people happy. I can throw together a few ideas for you, but if you're giving them money I'd rather you make them do it

diadem
eet bugz
posted 03-27-2012 05:22:18 PM
Bajah, that'd be great!

For now I'm going with 5 with the following modifications:
- The circles change to an open book, a chess piece, a game controller, and a smartphone.
- One of the letters turns into a squirrel game piece playing (or grinning because it just got an acorn, etc). For example, the a could be an acorn and the back of the p could be its bushy tail.

i'll change it once i get something better.

diadem fucked around with this message on 03-27-2012 at 05:22 PM.

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Blindy.
Suicide (Also: Gay.)
posted 03-28-2012 09:49:38 AM
quote:
This one time, at band camp, Bajah said:
A logo needs to represent your company, not necessarily your specific product(s) or brand of products.

A good logo does both.

For example, Amazon's logo. Pretty simple. There's the word amazon, and an arrow pointing from A to Z. The arrow is curved to be evocative of a smile, with the arrow head a smile line. The .com portion of the logo is in a less bold stroke than the Amazon portion. This communicates a lot.

Amazon has a bunch of stuff (From A to Z)
Amazon delivers stuff (The arrow)
Amazon makes you happy (the smile)
Amazon is more than a website (the name is more bold than the .com)

Pvednes
Lynched
posted 03-29-2012 05:45:31 AM
None of the above.

Are you getting a graphic designer to do this or are you using a competition? Because it looks like the latter, which is kinda a false economy.

diadem
eet bugz
posted 03-29-2012 07:36:59 AM
quote:
Pvednes wrote this then went back to looking for porn:
None of the above.

Are you getting a graphic designer to do this or are you using a competition? Because it looks like the latter, which is kinda a false economy.


Thanks. I'm using these guys for now but it won't hurt to put multiple lines in the water. I'll give the Something Awful logo teams a try while looking at multiple other options. One of my cousins got her PhD in media design (specializing in human computer interfaces) at MIT so I'll ask her for suggestions/contacts as well.

By the way, one of my Minecraft users had a similar reaction to you and thew together this as an example of what he'd suggest

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Inferno-Spirit
Sports Advocate
posted 03-29-2012 09:00:58 AM
That looks like a media company, not a game one.
"He lets the last Hungarian go, and he goes running. He waits until his wife and kids are in the ground and he goes after the rest of the mob. He kills their kids, he kills their wives, he kills their parents and their parents' friends. He burns down the houses they grew up in and the stores they work in, he kills people that owe them money. And like that he was gone. Underground. No one has ever seen him again. He becomes a myth, a spook story that criminals tell their kids at night. 'If you rat on your pop, Keyser Soze will get you.' And nobody really ever believes." - Roger 'Verbal' Kint, The Usual Suspects
Tarquinn
Personally responsible for the decline of the American Dollar
posted 03-29-2012 11:40:33 AM
Yeah, the triangle looks too much like the "play" button of some media device.
~Never underestimate the power of a Dark Clown.
diadem
eet bugz
posted 03-30-2012 03:10:53 PM
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Tarquinn
Personally responsible for the decline of the American Dollar
posted 03-30-2012 03:40:48 PM
While I like the squirrel, I think #06 might be the first good suggestion.
~Never underestimate the power of a Dark Clown.
Bloodsage
Heart Attack
posted 03-30-2012 07:06:12 PM
Squirrel!
To reign is worth ambition, though in Hell:
Better to reign in Hell than serve in Heaven.

--Satan, quoted by John Milton

nem-x
posted 03-30-2012 07:17:39 PM
Blindy.
Suicide (Also: Gay.)
posted 04-01-2012 09:19:27 PM
I kinda like 8, 9 is a bit too chess specific.
Bloodsage
Heart Attack
posted 04-01-2012 09:47:08 PM
Knights are more chess-specific than pawns?

Edit: I actually do like the squirrel best--it conveys playfulness and whimsy.

Bloodsage fucked around with this message on 04-01-2012 at 09:48 PM.

To reign is worth ambition, though in Hell:
Better to reign in Hell than serve in Heaven.

--Satan, quoted by John Milton

Inferno-Spirit
Sports Advocate
posted 04-02-2012 12:09:00 AM
quote:
Bloodsage had this to say about the Spice Girls:
Knights are more chess-specific than pawns?

Edit: I actually do like the squirrel best--it conveys playfulness and whimsy.


The pawn shape is used in a large number of board games. Sorry and Clue, for example.

Aside, if I pretend to look at the squirrel logo as someone that hasn't been reading (and voting for) all of your progress, it doesn't really look like a "p", and I can see how some people might not interpret the title of the company correctly as first look.

Edit: Actually, now I can't help but read "Apocolay" or "Apocopay" for 7, 8, and 9.

Inferno-Spirit fucked around with this message on 04-02-2012 at 12:11 AM.

"He lets the last Hungarian go, and he goes running. He waits until his wife and kids are in the ground and he goes after the rest of the mob. He kills their kids, he kills their wives, he kills their parents and their parents' friends. He burns down the houses they grew up in and the stores they work in, he kills people that owe them money. And like that he was gone. Underground. No one has ever seen him again. He becomes a myth, a spook story that criminals tell their kids at night. 'If you rat on your pop, Keyser Soze will get you.' And nobody really ever believes." - Roger 'Verbal' Kint, The Usual Suspects
Blindy.
Suicide (Also: Gay.)
posted 04-02-2012 06:42:38 AM
quote:
At least Bloodsage isn't Somthor:
Knights are more chess-specific than pawns?

Edit: I actually do like the squirrel best--it conveys playfulness and whimsy.


The squirrel is a good concept, I agree, but I think the tail isn't "P" like enough.

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