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Jessica Rabbit v2.0
Pancake
posted 09-09-2002 10:36:36 PM
Ok here it is.. my first attempt at anime.. I know its not the greatest.. Im not very good at bodies and never done wings before...

Thanks D for Hosting it

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Redmage Darkrayver
Moron
posted 09-09-2002 10:37:18 PM
You're very welcome dear. and It looks amazing.

Get drawing more!

Liam
Swims in Erotic Circles
posted 09-09-2002 10:37:21 PM
Very nice Less censoring is needed.
Mog
not really a mmembe rof tis boered
posted 09-09-2002 10:38:47 PM
\very nice, the wiogns look a little low, gbut theyir drawn very well, as is the rest of the pic,

Regret calamities if you can thereby help the sufferer; if not, attend to your own work and allready the evil begins to be repaired
- Self Rreliance
Jessica Rabbit v2.0
Pancake
posted 09-09-2002 10:51:26 PM
Oh and by the way.. though Im sure no one knows or well cares... but the sign in the corner of the drawing is the cross of the arch (is that right?) angels...
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Janus.
I am not a woman
posted 09-09-2002 10:55:28 PM
I give it an exalenta!
Elvish Crack Piper
Murder is justified so long as people believe in something different than you do
posted 09-09-2002 11:25:02 PM
Cencoring
(Insert Funny Phrase Here)
Suddar
posted 09-10-2002 12:09:10 AM
i'm a little bothered by the placing of her hand.
Genericgirl
Generictitle
posted 09-10-2002 12:40:19 AM
I like it. =)
Whats on her forehead?
JooJooFlop
Hungry Hungry Hippo
posted 09-10-2002 12:45:19 AM
Careful not to ever remove that "censored" tag, it's for your own good.

They brutally mauled the last guy who did.

They have more teeth than the entire Osmand family.

I don't know how to be sexy. If I catch a girl looking at me and our eyes lock, I panic and open mine wider. Then I lick my lips and rub my genitals. And mouth the words "You're dead."
Taeldian
Pancake
posted 09-10-2002 01:00:42 AM
Very nice, but the feet are confusing me!
Il Buono
You see, in this world there's two kinds of people, my friend.
posted 09-10-2002 08:07:11 AM
quote:
BlueMage had this to say about Captain Planet:
Thanks D for Hosting it

Wait wait wait, what the fuck? I ain't hosting shit.

"Those with loaded guns, and those who dig. You dig."
`Doc
Cold in an Alley
posted 09-10-2002 08:20:16 AM
Perfectionist comments:
>> She has to be an A cup. Anything larger and we'd see signs of her breasts in the space above the [Censored] tag.
>> Her right wing (left in the drawing) is set a bit low. The feather patterns came out well, but they should bend once you pass the joint. Bird feathers point towards the back of the wing, rather than the tip, with the exception of the large wingtip feathers.
>> The separation between her arms and her body should come up a bit higher, as it should be visible on her right (viewer's left) above the [Censored] tag. The separation of her left arm (viewer's right) would be hidden by her hair tuft anyhow.
>> I'm guessing those "legs" aren't supposed to look like legs. They lack joints for the knees or ankles.

Okay, that's it for those. Overall I think it came out quite well, especially for a first attempt. I especially like the "holding back the tears" facial expression.

Base eight is just like base ten, really... if you're missing two fingers. - Tom Lehrer
There are people in this world who do not love their fellow human beings, and I hate people like that! - Tom Lehrer
I want to be a race car passenger; just a guy who bugs the driver. "Say man, can I turn on the radio? You should slow down. Why do we gotta keep going in circles? Can I put my feet out the window? Man, you really like Tide..." - Mitch Hedberg
Please keep your arms, legs, heads, tails, tentacles, pseudopods, wings, and/or other limb-like structures inside the ride at all times.
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Redmage Darkrayver
Moron
posted 09-10-2002 08:29:06 AM
quote:
D had this to say about Tron:
Wait wait wait, what the fuck? I ain't hosting shit.

Dude, I'm "D".

Most of my RL friends just call me "D"

Il Buono
You see, in this world there's two kinds of people, my friend.
posted 09-10-2002 08:32:02 AM
quote:
Red Mage was listening to Cher while typing:
Dude, I'm "D".

Most of my RL friends just call me "D"


No.

"Those with loaded guns, and those who dig. You dig."
Jessica Rabbit v2.0
Pancake
posted 09-10-2002 08:36:52 AM
quote:
i'm a little bothered by the placing of her hand.

The hand by her.... upper body is trying to cover that part of the body and the other on is covering... that other area!

Oh I Probably should have mentioned the name of this drawing is Insecurity...

quote:
I like it. =)
Whats on her forehead?

Its supposed to be jewelery

quote:
Very nice, but the feet are confusing me!

Theyre supposed to be like that.. Amy Brown (an artest who does fairies) does the feet of her drawings like that...

quote:
Wait wait wait, what the fuck? I ain't hosting shit.

Wrong D, I meant Damon... I call him D sometimes...

and Thanks Ford... Thats the type of expression I was going for But I wasnt to sure if I managed to pull it off and yes she is a A cup.. I prefer my drawings to have smaller.... cup sizes and like I said not very good at bodies so yah legs suck for now

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Faelynn LeAndris
Lusty busty redheaded wood elf with sharp claws
posted 09-10-2002 10:36:42 AM
quote:
The logic train ran off the tracks when Ford Prefect said:
Perfectionist comments:
>> She has to be an A cup. Anything larger and we'd see signs of her breasts in the space above the [Censored] tag.

Agree, and it's a bit uniform as well. Try adding some jointed parts such as knee nods and etc to break up the straitness.

quote:

>> Her right wing (left in the drawing) is set a bit low. The feather patterns came out well, but they should bend once you pass the joint. Bird feathers point towards the back of the wing, rather than the tip, with the exception of the large wingtip feathers.

Not quite true but close. Past the hinge joint on a wing, the primary feathers point forward leading to the Wing tip feather. The feathers go in two different directions on an outstretched wing like that. Suggestions for practice. Find a nice marble figuringe or some such of a bird, and practice. Very nice job on base paterns though.

quote:

>> The separation between her arms and her body should come up a bit higher, as it should be visible on her right (viewer's left) above the [Censored] tag. The separation of her left arm (viewer's right) would be hidden by her hair tuft anyhow.

Correct, it would be more helpful to shorten the torso however to get her looking more proportionate. However, for the style she is going for, it looks fine. Anime is goofy looking like that.

quote:

>> I'm guessing those "legs" aren't supposed to look like legs. They lack joints for the knees or ankles.

Again, add some joint placement to breakup the monotony. For the style however, this requires little more than slight indentions at the knee area and a line. Again, anime is usually baseless and lacking any real detail. They are usually as uniform as you can get.

quote:
Okay, that's it for those. Overall I think it came out quite well, especially for a first attempt. I especially like the "holding back the tears" facial expression.


My two cents.


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I got lost for an hour and became god.
Blue Angel
Pancake
posted 09-10-2002 12:40:56 PM
edit: goddamn wrong account again!

[ 09-10-2002: Message edited by: Blue Angel ]

Surrounded by familiar faces with no name
None of them know me
Or want to share my pain
They only wish to bask in my light
Then fade away
To win my love, to them a game
To watch me live my life in vain
When all is done and the glitter fades, fades away
They'll get theirs eventually
And I hope I'm there
Jessica Rabbit v2.0
Pancake
posted 09-10-2002 12:42:36 PM
Thank you all for your comments.. Your really helping me improve this and furture attempts at this

Im very shy about my work and I was a little afriad to post it here, but now Im glad I did for all the "tips" I have recieved

Thanks

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Maradon!
posted 09-10-2002 12:54:37 PM
Looks great.

Great as in you could do an animated series with this style.

The wings look a bit sharp but that's forgivable. Feathers are extremely difficult to draw.

omfg i sux0rs
Pancake
posted 09-10-2002 02:27:43 PM
Can you plz Pm me the uncensored one...?
just think about how much i suck in REAL LIFE!
nem-x
posted 09-10-2002 02:35:36 PM
quote:
Dark_Nemesis impressed everyone with:
Can you plz Pm me the uncensored one...?

...not going to even ask.

BeauChan
Objects in sigpic may be hammier than they appear
posted 09-10-2002 06:42:00 PM
Great pic Jess, I think you've shown me that one?? anyways, you've inspired me to draw, I just don't know what.

and btw, not to criticize, but her head looks a bit big for her shoulders... or maybe I'm just blind.

Endured by EC for over 7 years and counting...
Jessica Rabbit v2.0
Pancake
posted 09-10-2002 10:54:16 PM
quote:
Mikey's Gal Pal had this to say about pies:
Great pic Jess, I think you've shown me that one?? anyways, you've inspired me to draw, I just don't know what.

and btw, not to criticize, but her head looks a bit big for her shoulders... or maybe I'm just blind.


Key word H "Anime" there head do tend to be a lil big...

And Maradön² animated series? Im not that good lol...

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Redmage Darkrayver
Moron
posted 09-10-2002 10:55:23 PM
LoL. Nice to see your art thread gets more attention than my art thread.

m3 sadf

»Waisztarroz«
Pancake
posted 09-10-2002 11:03:26 PM
quote:
nem-x had this to say about the Spice Girls:
...not going to even ask.

roflol headshot n00b!#@

I <3 Steel Battalion!
Jessica Rabbit v2.0
Pancake
posted 09-11-2002 08:19:54 AM
quote:
A sleep deprived Red Mage stammered:
LoL. Nice to see your art thread gets more attention than my art thread.

m3 sadf


aww boohoo RMs not getting any attention, let throw you a pity party! :P

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Maradon!
posted 09-11-2002 11:51:45 AM
Well, I think it's that good.

If you're going to brush up on anything, brush up your facial expressions. Try doing the same face, only angry, and then post it

Jessica Rabbit v2.0
Pancake
posted 09-11-2002 11:10:38 PM
quote:
ACES! Another post by Maradön²:
Well, I think it's that good.

If you're going to brush up on anything, brush up your facial expressions. Try doing the same face, only angry, and then post it



Im trying a varity of things.. Ill try that.. right now Im creating new charater(s) and im going to color in insecurity

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Maradon!
posted 09-11-2002 11:12:18 PM
ooo, insecurity...
Jessica Rabbit v2.0
Pancake
posted 09-11-2002 11:14:53 PM
quote:
Maradön² got all f'ed up on Angel Dust and wrote:
ooo, insecurity...

lol thats the one up above.. i might do up more of her in different postions/sketches/situations

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