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Topic: Original poem - be kind...
Mightion Defensor
posted 01-11-2002 03:02:41 PM
This poem has been "Lurking" in my brain past few days... just now I was able to put it into words.

Here it is, be kind:

This Love

It is an ocean without a boat.
It is a flame without kindling.
It is a bright star deprived of a sky.
This is my love.

It is a pair of empty arms,
It is a pair of waiting ears.
It is a heart with room to spare.
This is my love.

It is a desperate search,
It is a ship looking for a beacon.
It is a knight looking for a liege.
This is my love.

It is a sword that has seen no battles.
It is a bandage without a wound to heal.
It is a shelter with a waiting fire.
This is my love.

It is a source of waiting laughter.
It is an untapped well of comfort.
It is the words "Tell me all about it."
This is my love.

It is a vision of children.
It is a vision of contented nights.
It is a vision of a warm bed.
This is my love.

It is piles of silly gifts.
It is a mischievious touch.
It has been waiting a long time.
Who will claim this love?

- B.A.E, 1/11/02

[ 01-11-2002: Message edited by: Mightion Defensor ]

Il Buono
You see, in this world there's two kinds of people, my friend.
posted 01-11-2002 03:04:55 PM
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Topic: Original poen - be kind...

What's a poen? YOU PEON!

"Those with loaded guns, and those who dig. You dig."
Trillee
I <3 My Deviant
posted 01-11-2002 03:15:21 PM
Peon is you now.. apperently

psst Might I like

Malbi
posted 01-11-2002 03:29:12 PM
I feel sad now
but its a good poem
I Didnt ask to be Secretary of Balloon Doggies, the Balloon Doggies demanded it!
KaLourin
Illanae's Stooge!
posted 01-11-2002 03:35:17 PM
*salutes*

Impressive work Sir.

Dont make me slap you so hard your bucket spins around, and around,and stops sideways,thus confusing you, and making you run about London wearing your bucket, a g-string, and carrying a stick,smacking the ground while yelling "MAGICALLY DELICIOUS! MAGICALLY FUCKING DELICIOUS!"- {Tal} to Mortious
Hebrew 9:3- 'And the Lord said unto me, "Dude, there isn't a K in covenant."' - Snoota

This beer drops trou and fucks your mouth with pure hoppy goodness. - Karnaj
Genericgirl
Generictitle
posted 01-11-2002 03:57:43 PM
I really like your poem. You should write it down and save it. It could speak your heart to a girl some day.
greykittytwilight
As sands through the hourglass...
posted 01-11-2002 04:48:04 PM
Very nice. Ide put up some of my poetry..but it depresses even myself to read it.
..And the waitress is practicing politics.
As a buisness man slowly gets stoned.
Yes, they're sharing a drink they call Loneliness.
but its better then drinking alone.
Bane
BANNED
posted 01-11-2002 05:30:25 PM
thats no that depressive, its a bit upbeat if you asked me. Anyway I like it although the repetitiveness gets old after the first few stanzas
cout << "SCORE!";
Wily Kat to the Rescue!
Pvednes
Lynched
posted 01-11-2002 10:46:04 PM
Impressive.
Mightion Defensor
posted 01-12-2002 10:52:34 PM
* me nudges this to the top, just because.
The Last Strider
I will die alone
posted 01-12-2002 10:56:43 PM
Speaking as a fellow poet, that's really good.
"We have listened to you speak since the dawn of time, and we have learned to imatoot you exarktly."-The Simpsons

Necromancer: How DARE you imply that I was involved in a rude act with my undead servant! I will flay the flesh from your bones! I will summon a thousand maggot-ridden corpses to gnaw your flesh! I will trap your soul in-
Ghoul: My ass hurts.

Nae
Fun with Chocolate
posted 01-13-2002 11:00:50 AM
Oh Mightion, I really like it!

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