King Barx the IV sat upon a throne of gold inside his royal audience chamber.
Barx this night was troubled with visions that he had been having at night. The
candles in the chamber were burning long and they were nothing more than stumps of wax now. Barx pondered deeply the visions he saw at night, he saw the Crimson Moon Rising out his chamber window. He sighed as the moon rose because the visions made sense and he knew what was to come. The moon rose, then light of the Crimson moon was not the red crimson that it should have been it was instead Black. A fierce wind blow through the chamber's window, blowing out the candles the only light that was in the room. Alone sat the King in his dark chamber upon his throne, he started to cry when crimson light appear five feet from where he was sitting. A dark figure rose from the center of the Light. The figure appeared to be man but he had no shape to his features. The figure was just a figure of a man. The figure started to walk towards the kind and where the figured walked the crimson light followed, as the figure approached closer the king could see that the Dark shadow figure of man starting to take shape, first the head started to form. The face of the man was somewhat young only appeared to be in his early forties, appeared to be scared on his left cheek but other then that he was fine. The figure was now a man fully shaped and fully clad in Pit Black Armor with two jewels in the center of the Armor as part of some sort of Dragon crest. The man stopped about 2 feet from the man, mockingly bowing at the king.

"King Barx the Fourth, of the Kingdom of Antioc. I am Gali, Greatest of the Lower Gods. I come to you today to seek payment for the death of my men and the destruction of my greatest Creation! The Gate of Haven, the gate that you destroyed some four years prior to our meeting today. Now I do not ask much only the complete surrender and control of your Kingdom to the Holy Empire of Gali." speaking these words the man smirked.
Quickly the king replied "Good sir, four years prior this poor kingdom only took measures to protect itself from an enemy invasion."
"Yes...I see your stand, I change my offer then, I only want you to surrender to the Holy Empire of Gali." "My surrender? I have seen nothing that I should be scared of. I think you should surrender to me!"
"Pahh, I do not need to waste my time with you mortal I just want your Kingdom. Since you destroyed my men, you will destroy yourself and your allies" With that the jewels on Gali's armor began to glow a reddish green color, a green orb of light appeared in Gali's left hand.
"Now I'll show you my power" spoke Gali as he threw the orb at Barx. Barx started to get up but it was too late the orb of light had hit him. As the orb hit him its light began to move out from the orb and onto Barx's body. All the poor old fool could do was watch and scream in pain. The green light glowed brightly for a moment and then dimmed, where the king stood was now a horned demon, that squinted it's eye and roared.
"Yes yes now that's a good little king. Barx you know what you must do so do it quickly, I do not want to spend much more time on this rock." The Crimson light vanished, and with it Gali. The demon's shape began to fade and Barx the IV king of Antioc sat on his throne.

[ 08-19-2001: Message edited by: Bane ]

Wow that was really good, congrats.

31 views someone reply!

nice one, and im actualy responding this time. took a while to get a pic, but hey.

such a nice board with such interesting people.

Why are you a techno mage?

i have been one of magic in all games. in one my power exceded that of the Gods... but only in my manipulation of them. you remember dont you? heh heh

i think the gods had banished my avatar from the realm but i believe i was in a host body to witness that, good old gabby. So how is the old watcher?

Good story, but run it through a spell checker.

Sar...

heh its what i get for writing in notepad

good memories of good times befor then.. but i am well, and as always watching. ive expanded a bit since the project, but i still keep an eye out for a good plot. seems quite a few new ages will be open soon. i am look forward to a new world to explore.

hmm, good story though. i should go back through the other ones and get caught up.

editted it now all spelling boos boos gone